Today I was learning how to add in what we saw into our writing. We are doing this to make our writing more interesting
I enjoyed when we went inside the horse truck
I enjoyed when we went inside the horse truck
I found it challenging to not go back inside
I found it challenging to not go back inside
My digital learning object shows the horse truck
My digital learning object shows the horse truck
Next time I would change the writing
Next time I would change the writing
Kia ora Anna,
ReplyDeleteI saw the horse truck parked outside the school and wondered who owned it and why it was at a school. Now I know! Thank you for sharing your writing.
I found it hard to read your writing. I suggest you take the multi-coloured background out and may be make the font size bigger. Are you able to go to your slide and do that?
from Mrs Torrie